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November 13th 2007 10:58
Plush Monkey
I was out at the market when I found the most adorable looking plush monkey. Without a moments hesitation I bought it and took it to my love interests apartment. After knocking on the door (and waiting for what felt like forever) she opened the door, I held the plushy monkey up and said 'when I saw this monkey I instantly thought of you'.

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Comment by Brenton

November 13th 2007 11:12
The bad timing of this comment was apparent when she pulled a revolver and shot me three times. Looking down at my blood streaked chest, I felt my heart swarm with emotion. 'She truly loves me after all', I though, 'she missed my heart.'

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 13th 2007 11:30
Jumping up and down, she grabbed the plush and gave me a sloppy kiss.

I chuckled and patted her on the head. "C'mon girl, let's go get you a snack." I walked over to the kitchen, handed her a banana and sighed deeply.

If only she could talk, I thought. I had trouble relating to all the women I've met. Not even Jane could fill that hole in me. Perhaps I couldn't see in Jane the mother figure I desired, unbelievable as it may be. I think Freud mentioned some kind of complex with that.

Oh well, I shrugged, then proceeded to swing around the living room with my soulmate.

To hell with convention. You can't fight fate.


Comment by Ahmed

November 13th 2007 11:53
Fantastic finishes, both of you. I never would have thought of such clever endings/twists

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 13th 2007 14:21
I enjoyed this exercise a lot!

-Toni

Comment by Brenton

November 14th 2007 10:57

Comment by What's Your Story?

November 14th 2007 11:48
Heehee, thanks. Twas fun!

Comment by Anonymous

September 3rd 2008 02:58
WARNING:
This might be the worst endings ever, I think, Ah who cares its all just for fun anyways!!!

"It's so cute.", she said with a smirk on her face. I then knew she was lying. "You dont like it.", I said holding on to the plush. "I Do, I really do like the toy." She answered. "It's a plush." I answered back with a sudden sigh.

She looked into my eyes and said, "It's the thought that counts right?" I kept my cool and smiled. I dared not to argue and answered, "We can always give it to our child."

With an odd expression she shook her head and said, "W-we dont have a child." I slowly grabbed her hand and said, "Perhaps in the distant future we will."

My love snatched the monkey from me and said, "Just give me the plush." I stood motionless outside. The door slammed shut and I whispered, "Hey, what just happened?" An elderly man walked passed me and said, "Hey, try givin' her some jewelry next time romeo!"

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