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Downwrite - October 2008

Fishes

October 1st 2008 03:37

Little Fishes in the Sea
Don'ty really care for you or me
Or stocks or drugs or cars or books
for firefighters, Preists or crooks
For politics or other lies
For the size of legs and thighs
They only care to eat to live
And to swim and not to give
bigger fish a chance to munch
hence turning them into a lunch
No fishes seem to have it right
And have done so for very long
And what I'd like to ask the fishes
Is when did we get it so very wrong?

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Comment by Always Eighteen

October 1st 2008 10:29

Always Eighteen: Japan Edition

When you pull a fish out of water to see the world it realises something, panics, and then dies.

Comment by Brenton

October 2nd 2008 05:20

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Hope to see that in your book.

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