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little timmy now you must kill them all the unholy unjust and do your maths and do your jobs and shut up dont be so stupid go and watch tv rotton thing panadol

January 27th 2007 09:59
maby we could look at the world that we see and wed see theres so much more we could be to belive in the things that are real may be wrong would you steal from a church the most perfect song to save yourself from your ultimate wrong of existing its twisting the view of the world and the birds dont hate birds with feathers all curled so why do we hate the different skin when hate is feeling that birds cant begin to understand and the band plays shit about shit that they dont understand how do we know that gods not tanned or gay or ungrand does god even have a pollitical stand every baddie has a baddie who is a goodie to their baddies so are we goodies or baddies or maby we’re gaddies does it matter even when all sides have died of homecide suicide genicide cyanide why do you kill if were all going to die who do you remember from 1645 where the people then all trying to survive stay alive when of their life anyways was deprived from them anyway say lets laugh about gays and eathiopian children and people who payed with their life for loving a god and does god even like christians who kill and christians who fight when the rules clearly say though shalt not kill whether killing for god or money or thrill, another day annothe doller annother way to make her holler with the pain of the strain on the brain trying not to complane as you smack her dam face again and again and her son 21 shot his dad with a gun to save his mum, and was jailed for murder by the team with the one best lawer that money could buy and he didn’t have money so too bad goodbye how many innocent children must die till the government says i think that we should help these children survive and leave alone this campaign for selling our minds on things that we’re not going to do and i look at the world and try to smile but the say its all good your just in deniel
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Comment by David

January 27th 2007 10:21
Brenton,

Seriously man. Stop reading e-NORM-ous's posts ... He's channeling you, I swear. ***

David ...

Comment by Norm

January 27th 2007 10:31
Brenton,
I am the son of the chief and Mrs Jon Mumah. I am Jon's Mumah's boy. Good writing :B(renton). If you are reading them, let me know so i can send you a card.(that's a joke OK)
Norm.

David....mate, i'm speechless(in type and tongue).

Comment by Brenton

January 27th 2007 11:12
Read Norm's posts I do. Not all the time, but I do pause to rub my eyes upon them on occasion.

Dissapointed that it is a joke - I love cardfs. Seriously. If i get a card in the mail, i get exited. Or I think i do. nbext time I get a card, I make the promise to myself to get exited.

Comment by Norm

January 27th 2007 11:18
Brenton, and how do you feel about buffed men wearing naught but a bow-tie being popped in your mum's slit?


Comment by Ahmed

January 27th 2007 11:47
Well this is about as close to mind orgasms/that other blog downwrite should ever get

Comment by Brenton

January 27th 2007 12:00
Norm: My Internet is buggered so I can't see what you've said to me attamo. Bascially I get one look at any page... I read my comments through writers personel pages, and used up my one look on the last comment. Reply next time.

Honestly, Ahmed, I didn't think this was all that Normy~Davidy at all.

I guess it's the stream of conciouness thing.

I would have considered my piss weak attempt at erotica closer.

Not, mind for it's piss weakness. Just the tone.

Comment by Ahmed

January 27th 2007 12:02
It isn't that much like those guys, but the structuring did mimick it quite a bit, especially a lack of paragraphs which is what Norm is famous for (opposite of David, ).

Comment by Lilla

January 28th 2007 07:39
Brenton,

I thought this was going to be a post about punctuation? *lol*

I guess it is *chuckle*

Full stop!

Lilla

Comment by Brenton

January 28th 2007 08:08
Norm - I tend to avoid the thought.

Ahmed - Some might say Norm's blog is the Equal and Opposite of David's.

Lilla - Haha ,thasnky... it's a bit of a concept piece I guess.

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