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Downwrite - June 2008

WHATEVERNESS

June 12th 2008 15:04

Everything’s great

and that everything

can go fuck itself

I’m with the sky now

Right between it

I’ve been kissed

Her hair is long and dangly

Her nails pure

Bitter madness

I’ve been kissed alright

I’ve been kissed by bad luck

And the residue

Rolls down

And down

And

Down

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Posted By: Always Eighteen - Category: Poetry

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Comment by Brenton

June 12th 2008 15:33

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A downer, but nice.

Comment by wilson-pon

June 12th 2008 17:30

Our daily life is full of "Whateverness"...

Comment by Always Eighteen

June 13th 2008 01:06

Always Eighteen

Sometimes when it rains, it hails acid darts

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